You have used an ellipsis with 4 dots, started a sentence with 'But' (yet no comma before the predicate clause 'it's important'), I'm quite sure you didn't mean to use the word 'entity', and, most importantly, the compound adjective 'correction' you have offered doesn't include a hypen (it should).
As an actual English teacher, I wonder why you have blessed us with your condescending and incorrect advice?
I suggest you enjoy the free article, and nothing more.
